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句子改錯
一、
Employee can get more benefits from telecommuting than employer.
錯誤:可數名詞不能裸奔,前加冠詞(a,an,the)或者變為復數形式。
改: Employees can get more benefits from telecommuting than employers.
句型分析:
Employees :主語
can get more benefits:謂語
from telecommuting than employers:賓語
句中詞匯積累:
employ /?m‘pl??/ vt. 使用,采用;雇用;使忙於,使從事於 n. 使用;雇用 {
employer /?m‘pl???/ n. 雇主,老板
employment /?m‘pl??m(?)nt/ n. 就業;使用;職業;雇用
employment rate /re?t/ 就業率;雇用率;人力資源新進率
unemployment 失業
unemployment rate 失業率
}
telecommute /,tel?k?‘mju?t/ vi. (利用電腦終端機)遠距離工作;vt. (利用電腦終端機)遠距離辦公;過去式 telecommuted過去分詞 telecommuted現在分詞 telecommuting
benefit
bene 表示 ‘好‘ 的前綴
二、
Work at home using modern technology, can greathy enhance our efficiency.
錯誤:動詞不能直接做主語動詞做主語需要加ing變形
改:Working at home using modern technology, can greathy enhance our efficiency.
句型分析:
Working at home using modern technology:主語(動作的執行者)
can greathy enhance:謂語{
greathy:狀語
enhance:動詞
}
our efficiency:賓語(動作的接受者/承受著)
句中詞匯積累:
modern /‘m?d(?)n/ adj. 現代的,近代的;時髦的;n. 現代人;有思想的人;比較級 more modern最高級 most modern
technology /tek‘n?l?d??/ n. 技術;工藝;術語 ;復數 technologies
greatly /‘gre?tl?/ adv. 很,大大地;非常
enhance /?n‘hɑ?ns/ vt. 提高;加強;增加;過去式 enhanced;過去分詞 enhanced;現在分詞 enhancing
efficiency /?‘f??(?)ns?/ n. 效率;效能;功效;復數 efficiencies
三、
Children who are raise in impoverished families can generally deal with problems more effectively in their adult years.
錯誤:be+過去分詞 =被動語態
改:Children who are raised in impoverished families can generally deal with problems more effectively in their adult years.
句型分析:
Children :主語
who are raised in impoverished families :定於從句(用來修飾主語)
can generally deal with :謂語
problems:賓語
more effectively:狀語
in their adult years:時間狀語
句中詞匯積累:
raise /re?z/ vt. 提高;籌集;養育;升起;vi. 上升;n. 高地;上升;加薪;n. (Raise)人名;(英)雷茲;過去式 raised;過去分詞 raised;現在分詞 raising
擴:I am born and raised in + 地名 在這句話中raise 是生長,土生土長的
impoverished /?m‘p?v?r??t/ adj. 窮困的;用盡了的,無創造性的 v. 使貧困(impoverish的過去分詞)
deal with 對付;處理;
generally /‘d?en(?)r?l?/ adv. 通常;普遍地,一般地
problem /‘pr?bl?m/ n. 難題;引起麻煩的人 ;adj. 成問題的;難處理的
more effectively 更有效地(effectively的比較級)
adult years 成年
四、
The problems that are created by enironmental contamination is very hard to resolve.
錯誤:主句謂語動詞沒有和主句保持一致,(主句是復數)
改:The problems that are created by enironmental contamination are very hard to resolve.
句型分析:
The problems:主語
that are created by enironmental contamination:定語從句(are created謂語)
are:系動詞(謂語)
very hard to resolve:表語
句中詞匯積累:
create /kri?‘e?t/ vt. 創造,創作;造成 ;過去式 created過去分詞 created現在分詞 creating
enironmental 環境
contamination /k?n,t?m?‘ne???n/ n. 汙染,玷汙;汙染物
hard /hɑ?d/ adj. 努力的;硬的;困難的;辛苦的;確實的;嚴厲的;猛烈的;冷酷無情的;adv. 努力地;困難地;辛苦地;接近地;猛烈地;牢固地
resolve /r?‘z?lv/ vt. 決定;溶解;使…分解;決心要做…;vi. 解決;決心;分解;n. 堅決;決定要做的事;過去式 resolved;過去分詞 resolved;現在分詞 resolving
五、
Many students are like studying economics.
錯誤:like 當喜歡的意思時前面不能加be動詞
改:Many students are like studying economics.
句型分析:
Many students:主語
like: 謂語
studying economics:賓語
句中詞匯積累:
economic /,i?k?‘n?m?k/ adj. 經濟的,經濟上的;經濟學的 比較級 more economic最高級 most economic
like /la?k/ vt. 喜歡;想;願意;vi. 喜歡;希望;prep. 像;如同;adj. 同樣的;相似的;n. 愛好;同樣的人或物;adv. 可能;conj. 好像;過去式 liked;過去分詞 liked;現在分詞 liking
擴:You are like your mother.
like是介詞‘像‘的時候前面必須加be動詞
可數名詞
有單數和復數兩種形式。指一個人或一件事物時,用單數形式;指兩個或多個人或事物時用復數形式。名詞由單數形式變成復數形式的規則如下: 可數名詞復數的規則變化: 1. 一般的名詞詞尾直接加-s 。如: book → books room → rooms pear→pears house → houses day → days song→songs 2. 以s, x, ch, sh結尾的名詞,在詞尾加-es 。如: bus → buses box → boxes watch → watches dish → dishes 3. 以"輔音字母+y"結尾的名詞,要先將y改為i再加-es。如: city → cities body → bodies story→stories factory → factories 4. 以o結尾的名詞,通常有生命的加es無生命的加s。如: Negroes and heroes like eating tomatoes and potatoes.黑人英雄愛吃土豆西紅柿。 無生命:piano→ pianos radio→radios 有生命:potato→potatoes 5.以f 或fe 結尾的名詞,要將f或fe改為v再加-es。如: half → halves leaf → leaves knife → knives wife → wives 可數名詞復數的不規則變化: 男人女人a變e, man→men woman→women 鵝足牙oo變ee, goose→geese foot→feet tooth→teeth 老鼠虱子也好記,ous變ic, mouse→mice louse→lice 孩子加上ren,魚鹿綿羊不用變。 child→children fish→fish deer→deer sheep→sheep不可數名詞
1.不可數名詞沒有復數,當它作句子的主語時,謂語動詞要用單數形式 。 如:The food is very fresh. 食品很新鮮。 2. 有的不可數名詞也可以作可數名詞,有復數形式,但他們的意義往往發生變化。 如:water (水) → waters (水域) orange (橘汁) → oranges (橘子) 3. 很多的不可數名詞表示泛指時為不可數,表示種類時就可數,但意義大多不發生變化。 如:fruit → fruits food → foods fish → fishes hair → hairs 最常見的不可數名詞有:baggage, change(零錢), furniture, hair, homework, information, knowledge, luggage, money, news, progress, traffic ,beef,mutton,broccoli,orange(橘子,橘子汁,橙色) 其它不可數名詞還有:absence, age, anger, bread,courage, energy, equipment, experience, failure, fear, food, fun, health, ice, industry, kindness, labour, luck, marriage, music, nature, paper, peace, pleasure, power, pride, rain, research, respect, safety, salt, sand, silence, sleep, strength, snow, technology, time, trade, transport, travel, trust, truth, waste, water, wealth, weather, wind, work(工作)
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